Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Disagree letter

Dear the editor of The Courier Mail

Hi, i am Debbie Pang, one of the student from St Hilda's School. Recently, i have read an artivle called "The Real Cost of Posh's Locks" from you, and i really thought i shoulf write my disagreement with the article to you. Where you have mentioned that women in India had no idear whith what was going on with their hair after they shaved them, and the temple made a pretty great money from selling them to the western counties. In my point, they do not have to know ]because those hair were the things they shaved off and did not want to keep. Those were treated as garbege, so what need do people have to tell them before they "recycle" the garbeges they did not need anymore. Just like us, when peopel recycle the things we have though away, they do not ask for our promission before they do that. So why shoulf those women know either? I think it is allright that people selling shaved hair from the women in India even without telling, becaue they did not want it.

Kind reguards
Debbie Pang
24th of August 2009

1 comments:

Mrs Dutch said...

Debbie,

While it is good to see that you have started to post your work, there are a number of of pieces that have not been included.

You need to ensure that you post your ad analysis, the ad you have created (along with your explanation) and your 100 word report on your current reading book.

These need to be posted by no later than Thursday please.

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